Deflowering

Fundamentally, I feel the need to say that this creation of yours is interestingly average. The scheme you have gone with is curiously astonishing. It is obvious to me that you kept your nose to the grind-stone with your full magnitude of techniques. The contrast of this art piece is decisevely right for the essence that I sense you are struggling to create, but however, in saying that this comment is likely frivolous. Despite that, I feel that your use of line could of been improved upon as I contemplate that it doesn't compete with the brilliance observable in the rest of the art piece. In the end I would like to announce that it has been a pleasure to pen this review for you and I feel it will energize you to maximize the potential of your astounding piece.